Wednesday, October 13, 2010

The Holder of Death

In a particular city, in certain country, you may find a special gym. When you reach the front desk, ask to visit someone known as "The Holder of Death". The worker's face will turn white as if he just saw a ghost. He will then guide you to a wooden door and leave you afterward. You will have to knock thrice.

If you hear a young man saying "No, thank you." Then run. Run and leave the city and the country as fast as you can. Perhaps after visiting another Holder you may try again. However, should you hear an old man saying "Come.", you may enter and will find yourself in a forest.

Look up to the sky, if it is day, follow the sun. If it is night, follow the moon. Follow them, and do not leave the path you have taken, no matter what kinds of beauty or horror you might see. Should you ever leave the path; your soul will be tormented for an eternity after the body has died a horrible death. You will, after some time, notice that you are walking towards a mansion. Ignore it; keep walking, for it is an illusion made to confuse you.

Finally, you will reach a small wooden hut. As you open the door immediately turn around and enter the hut walking backwards, for no mortal could survive the sheer horror experienced by gazing upon the man who now is behind you. Ask him a question. "What will end them?" He will begin to talk with a voice that is gentle and kind as well as brutal and deadly. Listen carefully to what he says, as you might soon be the only one knowing their destiny. As soon as the man finishes his small tale, he will ask you to turn around, as he wants to give you a gift.

Do not do this. Instead, walk backwards until you reach something hard, a desk. Close your eyes and partially turn your body so you can reach out to the man and take the gift. When it touches your hand, close it and walk back to the door you came from. As you open it, say the words "We will meet another day" and walk out. You will be back in the gym.

Now, open your hand and look at the gift. The bone-finger is object 12 of 538.

38 comments:

  1. this wasn't as good as the others.

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  2. I'm sure this part is important, what would a mental bone finger be used for!
    Mesty =)

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  3. This reminds me of short scary stories I used to read as a kid. I enjoyed it.

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  4. Possession of the objects is all that is important. :D

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  5. Looking forward to the rest. Good read.

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  6. lol, I'll try this tip at the gym the next time i go

    btw, I have a new post on GTL Everyday :)

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  7. I like your post and I would really like to see more of them

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  8. 526 to go? This will be a long year.

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  9. that would suck to have to leave the country. lol

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  10. well, I didn't understand it so well, and besides, there's a lot of instruction, I'd write them out before continue, lol. But your story is cool, bro!

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  11. As bad as it might sound..ya lost me through that post. Lol. Maybe I'll understand it after I read it a few times. >_>

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  12. this story was a little creepy

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  13. Creppy read man. I like it alot :D keep posting more like this!

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  14. Funky little story.. took me a few lines till i realised it wasnt a really story ;)

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  15. lol the heck. The cat made me lol though.

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  16. ooo. There's too many more to collect :(

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  17. "No, thank you." ill be going! =)

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  18. Yeah, 538 is a shitload. HURRY UP.

    Just kidding. :P

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  19. It's very creepy at the beggining, then it just gets weird.. like "turn around", "walk backwards towards him" ... ok, they're original, but not catchy, maybe "avert your eyes, never look at him" or he lives in a cave, and you have to cross a bridge over canyon in total darkness. Think more commercially..

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